Mikawa Black Pine part 2

Well, after looking at the tree I decided that it would be best if the lower limbs were no longer part of the design. To my eye, it was too much foliage for such a skinny compact tree. I think letting the right side grow out a little will help in the future design.
Right side

Front

Given some time to reduce needle length, grow out the right and left sides and define layers it will be a much better tree. But this tree has had enough work for the moment and next year it will get more work, if I don't sell it first.
In person it looks much better than these pictures.